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I'm an eleven-year-old and I really like to go to beaches in the summer and spend New Year with my cousins in the winter. I like to find shells on the sandy beaches and swim in the salty water. I like to eat mochi and play with my cousins. I do try to be as happy as possible when I'm on vacation!!
I wanna stay at home. 'cause it's not stressful for me. You know my country has so much vacation time. so it is always boring for me. It's long long time better than Japanese vacation. We don't have any homework, any have to do. That's so bored... I should find out some activities in this country.
My favorite way to spend a vacation is to take a trip to the near by hot spring.
I enjoy hot spring in many ways.
For instance, outdoor hot spring has many unique views depending on the season. It entertains my eyes.
Also, I enjoy the effective minerals of the hot springs. It makes me feel as I am getting prettier.
At last, for a person like me who lives in urban area, it refreshes my daily stress that I feel.
From such reasons above, trip to the near by hot spring is my favorite way to spend vacation.
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