伝わりますか？また、どこを直せば良いですか？
I write diary since today. I had write because study English.But,didn't continue. I start write to smartphone because can anytime.
I started skincare since may this year.because,over 25th years old and think beauty forever and ever.At the same time,started make up.because,want to be cool mens.doing eyebrows,BBcream and rip.but,Don't cool mens.today,started photo editing app.surprised! editing parts,turn into kind of cool mens.and notice,ugly both nose and eyes.notice what's wrong.think change make up method.put out movies if turn into cool mens.
日記を始めたこと。メイクを始めたことを伝えたいです。
回答
私だったらこうします。
I started writing diaries from today. Instead of writing them by hand, I decided to type them on my smartphone because I can do it on my free time.
I started to do some skincare in May of this year, because I am over 25 years old and I think that beauty lasts forever. At the same time, I started to do some makeups. I did my eyebrows, BB cream, and my lips so that I be like one of the handsome men. I couldn't be one though, so today, I tried a photo editing app. I was surprised by how handsome I was able to become. At the same time, I was also able to notice about my parts of my face that weren't so good. I was able to figure out a different way of doing makeups.
これでいかかでしょうか。