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Do you think zoos are a good way of saving endangered species? Why?/ Why not?
- - -This is uneasy question. Although we have to save in danger of extinction species, it is not good method to live them in zoos, I think. To save them in zoos would be easy to take control for human, but they might suffer, not cozy, and don’t feel like they are in their habitat. They are alive as well as human, so if they got stresses a lot, they would die rapidly. This situation would be worst to our because our purpose is to protect and breed endangered animals or plants.
回答
This is uneasy question. → This is an uneasy question. (This is a difficult question.)
Although we have to save in danger of extinction species, it is not good method to live them in zoos, I think. → I think it is not a good method to keep them in zoos though we have to save them.
To save them in zoos would be easy to take control for human, but they might suffer, not cozy, and don’t feel like they are in their habitat. → Keeping them in zoos would be an easy way to take control them for human but they might suffer and not feel cozy or feel like they are in their natural habitats.
They are alive as well as human, so if they got stresses a lot, they would die rapidly. → They live as well as human, so if they got stressed a lot, they would die earlier than expected.
This situation would be worst to our because our purpose is to protect and breed endangered animals or plants. → This situation would be the worst to us because our purpose of this action is to protect and breed endangered animals and plants.
変更した箇所すべてが間違っているわけではありません。自然orスムーズかなぁと思い、言い回しを変更してみました。ご参考までに(^^