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2021-10-18 10:45
間違ってる箇所を直せと言われたのですがわかりません
More and more women are purchasing handguns,against the advice of law enforcement officers. Few of these women are criminals or plan to commit crimes. They no the risks of guns, and they except those risks. They buy weapons primarily because their tired of feeling like victims.
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2021-10-19 13:16:32
Kevin@MusicoLingo
More and more women are purchasing handguns against the advice of law enforcement officers. Some of these women are criminals or plan to commit crimes. They know the risks of guns, and they accept those risks. They buy weapons primarily because they are tired of feeling like victims.
書かれてある内容には合意しませんが、とりあえず間違っているところは直しました。
2021-10-18 15:48:47